Umm yeah somehow missed the email telling me you updated lmao I just read this now!!!!! I feel so bad for Tyler!! And Kellin is pretty much the man right now. Just shows how much she's grown since they met, and it's really just a beautiful thing. For some reason, I get the feeling that Tyler might struggle with this a LOT more than Kel, even if she's there for him 100%. A part of me can't wait to see what happens but a part also wants to cry knowing it can't possibly go as well as I want it to :P
@ TheHockeyWriter I'm so glad!!! Seriously, I love you too :P it bums me out that no one comments on this. Like it takes two seconds to say what you liked about it (obviously people like it because you have a ton of subscribers) and believe me, i know how much of a day maker it can be :) this really is my favorite story on here
Oh yes happy birthday!!! Honestly this might have been my favorite chapter yet. It was so adorable and sexy in the most perfect way. And your writing really just amazes me, seriously. I mean like I'm gonna go writer to writer here on you and just point out that your description of the boat was flawless. I'm not sure if I can really find the right way to put it, but the way you described it matched the description. Just incredible. And I don't care how selfish this is, I don't ever want the drama to start lmao. So happy to see an update and let me just say I'm appalled that this doesn't have more comments... This is honestly my favorite story. Ever. SPEAK UP PEOPLE
Let's be honest here. If you ever prematurely stopped this story, I think I would die. PLEASE for my well being keep going with this story lol. Every update draws me in more. I hate seeing this douche bag trying to weasel his way back into her life, and I hate that she still has feelings for him, but I'm proud that she recognizes Tyler is way too good to give up. And I REALLY hope that continues! Poor Tyler, I'd hate hearing all of that about a first love lol. They're so good together, it's just amazing.
And I have 2 things I'd like to point out: 1)The Canadian syrup = LMFAO SO AWESOME 2) "Tyler's not some kid. He's a champion" = Possibly one of my favorite lines in anything I've ever read. Ever.
So glad to see another update!!!!! I love love love where they're at right now, so bummed it eventually has to stop being so perfect :/ but I'm sure your incredible writing will make up for the lack of happiness in the story!'l can't wait for the next one and good luck with your tests!!!
I don't know why, but I have a feeling one of Tyler's women- of-the-month got pregnant, had/is having his love child, and comes seeking child support and Tyler's involvement in his kid's life. No matter what can't wait to read this. Update soon!
YES! You have no idea how freaking excited I got when I saw the email saying you posted this!!! Such a great start, I think I love them as much as you do lol. I know things are not going to be easy, and it breaks my heart haha they are PERFECT when they're happy. But, tis the way stories go I guess :P So glad you updated, but take your time! Thanks for giving us something to read over and over again until the next one!