Pull Me Closer, Kiss Me Faster - Comments

@ WriterNotAFighter
I know, right? I wish something like this would happen in real life to me...

This is the type of cliché everyone likes to read.

Dear Sempiternal:
I went back and changed that line. It started to bug me SOOO much every time I read it

Dear Sempiternal:
Thank you! I do realize that part was kind of off topic now. At the moment I had formed both of my characters into the types that like to ramble and think. I might edit that out or change it later but thanks again!

Oh and you just updated! Goody. Lol.

I really like this. It's a great start. :)

I just think the whole "Brit accent" and blah blah is a bit off key because it's not like that.

Anyway, very good. I look forward to reading more.