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  • WordsByMe

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    @ WriterNotAFighter
    I know, right? I wish something like this would happen in real life to me... Wink
    May 2nd, 2013 at 04:01am
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    This is the type of cliché everyone likes to read.
    May 1st, 2013 at 02:24pm
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    Dear Sempiternal:
    I went back and changed that line. It started to bug me SOOO much every time I read it
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:46am
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    Dear Sempiternal:
    Thank you! I do realize that part was kind of off topic now. At the moment I had formed both of my characters into the types that like to ramble and think. I might edit that out or change it later but thanks again!
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:19am
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    Oh and you just updated! Goody. Lol.
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:17am
  • Hearse;

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    I really like this. It's a great start. :)

    I just think the whole "Brit accent" and blah blah is a bit off key because it's not like that.

    Anyway, very good. I look forward to reading more.
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:15am
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