Compass - Comments

@ resplendently
oh good to know:)

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
Nope. I fangirl constantly.

@ polka dot perfection
I do what is one my mind.

lol yeah I know what you mean:D

@ polka dot perfection
I hate a lot of stories like those that shy away from the love that they have. Mainly because the ones I hate are the ones that very cliche and pretty much all the same with names

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
exactly, that's one of the things I absolutely love about your writing and what draws me in ^.^

@ polka dot perfection
I don't like to beat around the bush.

@ Once-ler Hina
I usually write as it goes through my mind. I don't always catch it when I go back through the first time of rewriting. Usually when I finish the story completely is when I catch those mistakes.

I'm liking this story a lot, but I noticed a few errors in the first chapter.
In fact, the colony wants to throw him out off the position,
I believe off is supposed to be of.

He has done nothing but destruction for our territory.
I'm not sure whether you meant to say, "but to destroy our territory," or "He wants to do nothing more than to destroy our territory."

Sorry, it seems like that needs to be rephrased so that it flows better.

Anyways, I will come back and read the second chapter a bit later. You're doing a great job with this story so far.

I agree that the mating thing was a little hey wer're mated enemies, what's up but I like it, because that's your style, it's hey, here's how it is:D

@ resplendently
I thought that I was the only person who fangirls

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
*fangirls over the thought f another chapter* \m/

@ resplendently
I may have time to write it this weekend if I feel inspired.

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
In that case, I can't wait until Austen's chapter.

@ resplendently
Exactly

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
Ohhh. Okay. I get it.

@ resplendently
At first I was going to make this bigger, but I wanted to make Theodore's POV a little more calm and mellow where as Austen is going to freak out.

@ Apple Pie Moonshine
okay.

@ resplendently
Yeah I wanted this to be a little more subtle. I have plans for this.

I kinda thought the mate thing would be a bigger deal. Also this chapter wasn't written as well as the others. Don't get me wrong, I like it, I just would have done it a lot differently.

@ polka dot perfection
Now that you say that I see the familiarities. Oops. Sorry. I do have a little different plans.