A Reverse Chronological Portrait Written by a Young Girl - Comments

This is beautifully thought-provoking and poetic, holy hell. Every poem was wonderfully written and it all flowed together so well. You have an awesome way with words.

So I have to admit, you made me very curious about this story when I first read the title. It was something I had never seen before and I definitely wanted to read more. Crazy how you can pull someone in with just the title.

Regardless this story is perfectly written. I like how it isn't forced. It's just a series of tiny poems that let us in to this young girl's life. What I love about the poems is that they're so simple. They're a bit vague, but I love that air of mystery you put into this story. It keeps the reader eagerly reading.

I'm just really jealous of how you can tell such a wonderful story using just poetry. Wonderful job.

Oh my goodness, it's like a series of little poems that make my mind explode with crazy questions and thoughts of how magnificent your similes, metaphors, description and just stories overall are. You write and I don't know what happens to my head, it's kind of like a toss up and it just pulls a lot of random stuff to mind. I think it's a great thing, it's inspiring (I think I said that before) because it's making me think in ways I don't really think and make me want to write things and write words in different sequences, I'm thrilled but I realize I might sound crazy.

He was a walking lyric. Just beautiful, and amazing and I can't get enough.

This was delightfully beautiful. At first it was quite confusing, but then I caught on. This was such a wonderful idea that I have never seen before, and had I just heard someone say that they were going to do it I wouldn't expect anything magnificent. But I've seen it executed now and I don't think anyone else could pull it off but you. The way your words flow are just so pretty and lovely. Though it's just over 200 words and 8 chapters, you've told a better story than some writers can do in 200,000. I love this. I truly, whole heartedly love it.

And now excuse me, I'm going to go read it again. Forward and backward. ❤

i've missed you and your writing

your words flow so poetically i'm jelly