Smoke and Mirrors. - Comments

Can't wait till you start this back up! Really good so far!!

ME WANT MORE AND I LUFF U FOR DOING IT A 4 IN THE MORNING

I only read the first chapter, because Papa Roach stories aren't my thing. Lol, but the first chapter was really promising and it has amazing potential. <3

Looking forward to more!

loved it can't wait for more

This is really cool. Normally don't get into Jacoby stories that much, but this one might make me read more.

This is awesome

Sounds really interesting. I never seen a Jacoby story before. It does sound pretty awesome.

I didn't see any errors or anything, so good job! Love the banner, it's so pretty.

I have never read a Papa Roach fanfic even though I used to be so IN LOVE with Jacoby. ^_^ Your layout is simple and so easy to read. The banner is beautiful and your summary is a bit short but still interesting.

For the intro, I like how you put that little quote there. It's a simple quote that we'd often heard of but still it flows really well with the rest of the chapter.

You have a talent for writing and I like your writing style. Keep up the good work. ^_^

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I'm not really a fan of Papa Roach, I have only heard a few songs by them, but I liked them. I would consider reading on. I really like you how you have written this. I enjoy stories that are written in the first person.