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  • maroon5er18

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    @Hazy
    Thanks for recommending!
    May 5th, 2013 at 04:24am
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    @likeanamerican
    OK thanks I'll try:-)
    May 5th, 2013 at 12:49am
  • likeanamerican

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    This is a cool idea, but it needs lots of formatting and grammar help. Try and spend more time proofreading and spacing out your story and dialogue.
    May 5th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • maroon5er18

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    I will:-)
    May 4th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • juliaj123

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    Wait this is going to be so cute! Please update soon! Oh it's going to be so cute!
    May 3rd, 2013 at 05:28pm
  • softball.dreamer

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    I loved the last line! I hope you continue this story.
    May 3rd, 2013 at 04:39am
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