Addicted - Comments

I'm here as a judge for the NC-17 Only contest.

I really appreciated how much back story you added to this. I felt like I really knew the characters, which isn't something we always get with smut, and I really enjoyed that. I also liked the fact that we got to see that Amy and Zayn have a real relationship that isn't perfect, but they make it work however they can. The way you wrote Amy was really relatable (despite the fact that she's dating Zayn), she fulfilled the role of the "caring girlfriend" really well and I loved that you added the fact that she was on Tumblr because I would be the exact same way.

I think this is the most realistic sex scene I've read so far. Of course it had that "perfection" air to it, but you could tell they loved each other and you paced it really well so things didn't seem like they were all happening at once and then it was over. I didn't feel super overwhelmed while I was reading which was really nice.

Thanks for entering!

Wow... this was pretty great, aha! I loved it. :) [I wish I could add something helpful, but I thought the fic was perfect]

Wow. Just wow. So hot :D

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

that was... beautiful... :') lol that was a really good one. I forgot that it was a fanfic halfway and was wondering about how the tumblr fanatics would react if they knew that Zayn Malik was having sex. Then i remembered it was a fanfic and luaghed so hard... XD

I was asking because on this site, one-shots are usually labeled as "only chapter" or "one of one". I was confused, that's all.

@ prettypsyche
Yes, it's a one-shot :)

Is this a one-shot?