My Sexy Neighbor - Comments

So wow. I'm so sorry it's taken me months to read and comment on this, but damn I'm so glad I got around to it. This was perfection. I love Matt's eventual submission and Stephanie's dominance over him, it was so hot and sexy. You took the theme of the contest and went to the sky with it, great job!

Wow! Just wow! I seriously need to take a cold shower now n take care of *clears throat* well you know. Ive been so fucken sexually frustrated just by reading a one shot! Good story. Everything about it was fucking amazing! The song fit perfectly with the story.

Oh wow. I can't even. That was hot!!! That's stuff for a story

Well, that was fucking hot! I think I need a cold shower or some alone time...

I honestly don't know what else to say other than WOW. Your descriptions and just everything. Wow.

@ NeverWakeMeUp
Yes, it was very racy indeed, just the way I like em lol ;)

OMG!! YES!! Maybe Matt is usually the one in control but when it comes to Arianna, she likes to be in control and he secretly likes that about her and part of the reason why he keeps coming back to her but he will have his occasional moments where he takes control too, have to balance it out.

AHHH STOP IT! YOU'RE GETTING ME ALL EXCITED AGAIN!!! I CAN'T WAIT! It's all just for me, hehe :D

That's actually not a bad idea, make it into a mini series I never even thought of that. I just might do that, I'll start brainstorming ideas for that ;)

I know right, Matt getting spanked would be so fucking hot, mmm ;)

Yep, that line just came to me as I was thinking about how I should end it and I thought it was perfect :D

Oh you don't suck at comments. Just having you commenting on it makes me happy. Thank you for your comment it made me happy. I'll be even happier though when you start my story...right *cough* now *cough* lol.

I love you <33333 and here's a hug for you for being so awesome

LOVE THIS!

This was so racy! I knew it was on as soon as she started making the lemonade!

Hmmm, A completely helpless Matt? I could totally work with that in a story that I'm brainstorming for and may start writing sooner than expected

She was such a tease! Big bad Matt was all pissed because he didn't have control over the situation, now she has him eating out of the palm of her hand LOL OMG, the spanking and the vibrator.....UGH I can't stand it!

I loved the final line too! “So, tell me about your friends.”

OMG, you could totally make a series out of this one and do it will all 5 guys if you wanted to!

Again, I know I suck at commenting, but I loved this! Now, off to reply to you comment and perhaps start writing a Matt fic.....

@ amabie.
Awww thanks, that made me smile. Psh, I suck at detail lol. When I wrote this I tried to work more on my detail and I guess I did a good job. Yep, mm helpless Matt just whew! Thank you for you lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it

I've read and reccd this but I just want to leave a comment too.
First you're so talented hun you write suck detail I love it :)
And I loved that Matt is the helpless one in it for a change hot damn that was hot!

First of all, I want to start off by saying how much I love the details you put into this. It's something I'm trying to work on.

Second, this is awesome because I've always had a thing for men older than me. Not grandpa old though, just older than me. lol

Okay, I did NOT expect the story to develop like that. You know, the drugging part. Teehee. But, I completely LOVE how it turned out. I'm going to be honest, I thought it was going to be a bit creepy because of that bit, but the story was hot!

Many smutty one-shots, especially in the Avenged Sevenfold fandom sometimes get a little repetitive. It's not everyday you find a one-shot that completely surprises you and blows you away.

Anyways, great job. I'll definitely check out more of your work beyond the Mibba treats! :D

Ah, okay. This was so difficult to read, simply because I had family walking all around me while doing so and, with my luck, they'd catch a glimpse and question me, but I was finally able to finish it!

This isn't what I usually read. I've read A7X smuts before but they always seem to get repetitive and I just get bored, but this one was definitely different. This is definitely a huge, unexpected difference because I'm used to reading stuff where Matt's the dom. You're also a great writer. You don't leave out anything and, especially since it's such a long one shot, nothing dragged on and that's surprising, since it's hard to do. Judging from your other one shots, you've definitely got talent and I can't wait to read more from you.

Holy mother of God...my ovaries exploded.....what the hell woman.....this was so freaking amazing!!!! You're writing just keeps getting better and better!!!
My word, if Matt was my neighbour, i'd be doing the exact same thing so yeah!! Wow!!
Just....ughhhhhhhh
(Happy Mibbaween!!)

Well, obviously, you write the best 12k smut one-shots. 'Nough said. Haha I don't comment often, but do know that I read every single one of your smut one-shots because you're so great at writing it.

@ little dove
It's about time! lol jk. Aww this comment made my night so thank you for that. I have a big smile on my face right now. I'm glad you liked it, I worked really hard on it. Yeah, I paid special attention to adding detail to this one and it seems that it paid off haha. Haha, you are so funny girl, I loves you. Thanks again so much for this, I'm anxious to find out the winners.

Hey, it's me, finally getting around to judging your story and wow.

Your descriptions are so amazing. I'm kind of amazed at how much information you've managed to pack into the story. I can't really blame Stephanie...if I had that hot of a neighbor living next door it would practically be illegal for me NOT to try and get some, if you know what I mean? Though, I find it kind of funny she used the whole, "I'm out of sugar" routine. x3 And I just want to get this out of the way, but Matt can come repair ANYTHING of mine ANY day of the week.

Like I said before, your descriptions are so freaking amazing. I am just so jealous of Stephanie getting to touch his chest like that. Mmph.

I would find it to be hard not to look, too.

Phew. Now that I'm done reading... this Georgia heat, I tell you what. It's hot in here... maybe it's your story but oh well, let's not travel down that road.

Once again you've delivered a fantastic story. I've read several of your stories and they are just great. Your descriptions are very powerful, and I could vividly see what was going on... and boy were those spankings nice. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I didn't really see any problems or bumps along the way. It read so very smoothly. I'm so used to thinking of Matt being the dom, but seeing him behave that way? That was so very... I need a word... like it was superb.

Great writing; great fetish; great story!

Well then. That's definitely not what I usually read, but it caught my eye when I first opened up the page of your stories. It's definitely different than what I normally read but holy hell haha.

Very descriptive, you do a wonderful job at describing everything... and I mean EVERYTHING. Lol and it wasn't short, I'm not used to reading such long one-shots, so that was a huge bonus as well.

All in all, fantastic job! I'm gonna go take a cold shower now! =]

Ahem, well then.
I had to stop reading about halfway through. I couldn't stop blushing. >.>
Otherwise, great job, really. You are a wonderful writer.

I'm sorry, but if Matt Sanders was my neighbour I would never leave my house! Haha. Oh wait, I would, just to kidnap him and tie him to my bed bed for all of eternity! Mwahaha!

Cake and lemonade, the perfect disguise to go talk to the sexy neighbour! XD I'm sure there are SO many things he's good at

Drugging him?! My god, she really wants him huh? LOL. Look at Matt, the peacemaker, you aint getting outta this buddy! She's such a tease!! Haha. Banana? XD

DADDY KINK ALERT

I've never even thought of a submissive Matt before, but him being dominated by a girl is kinda hot! Oh jesus, now she's spanking him! *falls over*

She should totally do Brian next ;)

Well... If you'll excuse me I'm just going to hang out of my fucking window! XD

Good job honey! :D

@ Mrs. Shadows
Of course I liked it! XD I'm gonna end up reading it again. :D

awesome storie and the whole plot was so perfect... cant wait to see what happens... ps That storie gave me a hummana hummana hummana boner

Well that was lovely. *let's the steam out of my collar* HAH! You always manage to amaze me my dear. You made this sexy and it was nice the way you changed up Matt's role. Very refreshing. Love you always.