Ghosts in the Snow - Comments

I love it! XD

good story...hope you update soon :)

Oh.My.Jesus.!! I friggin love this chapter.! Made me feel all fluffy and poop, Then i got angry, Why must you doing something to vic!?!?!

I liked this! In fact, I actually liked this a lot! I thing the plot is very good, I have not really read many stories involving these bands, so I can't way if it's particularly original, but never the less, it's good. I noticed a fee grammatical errors, and a few capitalization mistakes, but nothing too major. Actually seeing as this is already five chapters long, and they don't take story the story, I wouldn't worry about it, I just wanted to let you know. I like the layout, the pictures in the back ground are cool. I think this one has a lot of potential too, keep going, you are doing very very well. Good work!

OMG!!!!!! Plz update!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!

I cant wait till the next chapterrrrr!!!!!

I've never really read any bandfictions before Even though I had no idea who the characters were it was easy enough to still follow along and not be confused. This is interesting

Sorry this took me so long to comment on!

Layout and Summary:
The layout was okay, it looked a little busy with all the pictures and the color grey everywhere got a little overwhelming and did start to hurt my eyes a bit. The summary was pretty good, I liked that it gave a good idea of what the story is going to be about. It was however a little too long, and I would suggest cutting it down a bit.

Writing:
Your writing is simple but nice. It's easy to follow along with and understand what you're trying to say. Not too many spelling or grammar mistakes, though some of your sentences were a bit short. Also, after chapter two you stopped spacing out the paragraphs, which is definitely something I recommend going back and fixing.

Plot:
Your plot is very original, and different from most bandfics I've read, I can definitely tell you thought it through. It could almost read like an original fiction, and that's a good thing. It's definitely intriguing and built my curiosity up. I also liked the inclusion of anxiety problems, considering I have them myself.

Characters:
I like your characters so far, and am interested to see how they develop. I really liked the brothers relationship and thought it was quite sweet. I also liked that you included the parents, because a lot of times writers leave them out, which doesn't make much sense for a story with teenage characters.

Overall:
You have a good start. Keep going!

I really like this fanfic.
The best fanfic i've ever red.
I'm really enjoying reading it, so please keep updating it.
Really really good. ***** :) <3

I don't really know who this band is, nor do I usually read band fics, but this is pretty good. :)

The characters have a lot of depth! I can tell you've spent quite a bit time thinking them out, and trying to make them your own. As for the picture frame, it's quite unique! I'm wondering why his mother reacted the way she did. She totally knows something...

This story is very intriguing, keep up the excellent work!

I like the story so far <3 keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what's next.

This story seems pretty interesting. Can't wait to see what happens. :)

Liking the story so far, anxious to see what happens from here.