Aw this was such a good story! I really like how you didn't go the cliche route and make Addison fall helplessly in love with Braxton, you left the door open for both characters to grow in different ways. I think you had both their personalities spot on from the character traits they were given. Overall you did a fantastic job :). Thank you so much for entering my contest! The winners will be announced very soon!
This was rather cute. The only thing that go to me was how much he was hated for no obvious reason. So that didn't fit with me. But the rest, the rest was adorable.
The ending was adoreable as hell! I like the ending the most because how real it was. It actually seemed like two people arguing/making up.
The part where the kids took his stuff. That really upset me. I remember that feeling when I was in high school, younger though. Kids tend not to do that when they are 18. But yeah, I know that feelings so I tried my best notti get angry at them.