December, 1976 - Comments

  • BitterEndXII

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    @ holly-xo
    It's okay :) Awweh, thank you :) I'm glad you like it! :3
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • holly-xo

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    @ BitterEndXII
    fair enough haha! at least you recognize it then :) I'm reading this as we speak, i'm only on chapter 4 so far and i'm already enjoying it :D x
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:41pm
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    @ holly-xo
    I know that I do this, but to me it always looks strange with punctuation. I know it's wrong, but I'm self serving, so thus it exists. XD But thanks for the comment :) x
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • holly-xo

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    can I give a bit on constructive criticism? Whenever someone speaks, you need to put punctuation at the end. Like, a full stop or comma.. I noticed you only put punctuation in at the end of speech when it was a question. Other than that, I think this is quite good :)
    May 31st, 2013 at 11:35pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    Ohhhh pooor poor Gerard:( Fwankie didn't know...

    This story makes me saaaad... Too many feels:( reminds me just a lil bit of a splitting of the mind..... pls update soon
    May 31st, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • PLEASEJUSTLETMELEA

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    ;~; Gerard
    But yay! Glad you updated! They had a picnic, aww :3
    May 31st, 2013 at 08:59pm
  • Lilibet

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    Ahhh my god too cute!
    May 28th, 2013 at 09:43pm
  • PLEASEJUSTLETMELEA

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    Awwww!!!! reunions!!!!!! :D Loved this so much! But aw Gerard:(
    May 28th, 2013 at 09:10pm
  • Keely Noelle

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    I simply adore this story! You are an amazing author. Honestly, even if they story wasn't a fanfiction, I would still recommend and praise you on the writing and your beautify formed sentences and word choice. This plot line it self if wonderful too. At times where I think you failed and made something typical, I am pleased to see you trick my mind and make it interesting and enjoyable to read.
    I honestly hope you continue to 'wow' me and your other readers with every chapter you write.
    May 28th, 2013 at 07:36pm
  • Lilibet

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    Gerard's back! Very Happy
    May 28th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • baysway

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    Loved it! I literally clapped my hands with delight when I saw the update in my inbox. Yes, I am a freak. Wink
    May 28th, 2013 at 06:20am
  • poodeep

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    wow i just found this like a day ago and its really great :) keep up the good work!
    May 28th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • ShotToRemember

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    Gerard's back and she's dead--yippee!!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter because this is way too awesome. And yay for kissing!! But when the doctor slapped Gerard I... ack I flipped out inside a little bit-_- Good thing though he didn't really seem to mind it. You know, he handled it with a joke and whatnot. Yeah. Okay.

    Great work:) Can't wait!
    May 28th, 2013 at 03:03am
  • PLEASEJUSTLETMELEA

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    Aw Gerard!!!! Why you do that to yourself? :(
    But aw yay they kiss and make up and awwww. Love this, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
    May 28th, 2013 at 01:40am
  • TYLER.F.T.W.W.W

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    *gasp*
    ...update. update now.
    May 27th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • Alanasaurus

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    gerard no :(
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:21am
  • ShotToRemember

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    Omgee gerard no!! Whhyyy aehhhhheeha..:( pls update soon! These last few updates have been really great and yeaaah franks mom is dead!!! I need to know what shit is happening with gerard though!!!
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:11am
  • baysway

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    I cannot wait for the next update! I'm probably wrong, but maybe Gerard acted so strange and hurt himself because he heard Frank struggling in a dream and thought it was remorse for making out. Anyway, absolutely LOVE this story.
    May 27th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • Lilibet

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    Oh my god no don't leave it on that! I love this story so much and I need to know what happens next.
    May 27th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • shinkyo

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    You got me so addicted to this story, you have no idea... It's seriously so good to find an update everyday and yet I can't help but wish for more.

    I wonder if things will be okay for Frank now (I doubt so but I'll keep my assumptions for now). For some reason I do like to see Frank suffer in this story, maybe that's why I like Gerard a lot.
    May 27th, 2013 at 01:00am