@ BitterEndXII fair enough haha! at least you recognize it then :) I'm reading this as we speak, i'm only on chapter 4 so far and i'm already enjoying it :D x
@ holly-xo I know that I do this, but to me it always looks strange with punctuation. I know it's wrong, but I'm self serving, so thus it exists. XD But thanks for the comment :) x
can I give a bit on constructive criticism? Whenever someone speaks, you need to put punctuation at the end. Like, a full stop or comma.. I noticed you only put punctuation in at the end of speech when it was a question. Other than that, I think this is quite good :)
I simply adore this story! You are an amazing author. Honestly, even if they story wasn't a fanfiction, I would still recommend and praise you on the writing and your beautify formed sentences and word choice. This plot line it self if wonderful too. At times where I think you failed and made something typical, I am pleased to see you trick my mind and make it interesting and enjoyable to read. I honestly hope you continue to 'wow' me and your other readers with every chapter you write.
Can't wait for the next chapter because this is way too awesome. And yay for kissing!! But when the doctor slapped Gerard I... ack I flipped out inside a little bit-_- Good thing though he didn't really seem to mind it. You know, he handled it with a joke and whatnot. Yeah. Okay.
Omgee gerard no!! Whhyyy aehhhhheeha..:( pls update soon! These last few updates have been really great and yeaaah franks mom is dead!!! I need to know what shit is happening with gerard though!!!
I cannot wait for the next update! I'm probably wrong, but maybe Gerard acted so strange and hurt himself because he heard Frank struggling in a dream and thought it was remorse for making out. Anyway, absolutely LOVE this story.
You got me so addicted to this story, you have no idea... It's seriously so good to find an update everyday and yet I can't help but wish for more.
I wonder if things will be okay for Frank now (I doubt so but I'll keep my assumptions for now). For some reason I do like to see Frank suffer in this story, maybe that's why I like Gerard a lot.
It's okay :) Awweh, thank you :) I'm glad you like it! :3