Kill Me Now - Comments

Im guessing this isnt being written anymore?

Im sorry you couldn't find anyone to co-write it with you.): You were off to a great start and i wish i could of helped. Its a shame that we didnt get to see where your imagination would of taken you with this.

@ Hail Agramon
I'm sorry! I actually forgot about this story :p I have been busy with school and family issues but I will update as soon as I can :) if someone wants to help me come up with ideas and basically cowrite on this it would be greatly appreciated :D I have also been working on an austlan fic that I should be posting soon :3

are you gonna write this?

More!! Please!!!

I love how sarcastic frank is love this already can't wait for the next update! :) please update soon x

thanks next chapter which hopefully ill put up tomorrow, will definitely have double spaces and paragraphs :) i just typed this up on my ipod so i didnt want to take the time to do that :D

Oh I meant to say I like how sarcastic Frank is (:

So I love Dom/fertiles and read about every one.
And I like this.
But it would be easier to read if you did doubles spaces between paragraphs. Or if this is supposed to be one paragraph you could still throw some double spaces in to make it easier to read.
But this is good so far!