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I will die if u don't add more to the story!!!

As a writer I total get where you're going because you could end it here because they end up together. By j really love Pat and your story TOO much to have it end here. I also think you're Vic story should feature Kim and pat maybe.

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Just for y'all, i'll write more. I will forewarn you that chapters may be sporadic. I 'm getting ready to move into my first apartment and packing is a bear. Also, will likely not have internet there until sometime later in the month possibly into June. Going to work hard to hammer something out for you though.

Moreeeee so good!!!! You're a great writer

We want more!!!!

No this cant be the last one. You should do more like a sequel or something. It could be like farther into their relationship or something if the problem is your getting bored. I like this story too much for it to be done.

no keep going definetly dont stop

This is definitely not a good stopping place! SO GOOD! MORE!MORE!MORE! love it

What?? You cant stop now!! More!

that can't be the end!!!!! it was soooo good!! i love your writing!

More, please!!!!! you can't just leave us hanging like that.

@ Phedre Ok that's what I thought got it!

OMG this chapter was so sweet! They all really love and I don't thinks he realizes the things in front of her face because she's SO used to doing everything for anyone and everyone else. So happy you got a chapter out, and can't wait for the next update!

@ bxgurl95
Hjalmarrson is a blackhawk, his fiance is Elina Casell.

@ Phedre
Sorry, I meant in chapter 5 Pat's sisters were staff there were outed to Elina's and Nick's house for game night. Is that his girlfriend or something? And he's one of the teammates right?

@ bxgurl95
what party are you referring to? ( which chapter is it in?)

The only thing I can imagine you would get confused about is Nicklas Hjalmarsson vs. Patrick's girlfriend Nicki. (and in hindsight the girlfriend should have had a different, more recognizable name.)

@ Phedre
Then who were the two that were throwing the party? And that you so me for answering my questions (and I really love the nickname/title)

@ bxgurl95
1- There's a first time for everything. :) 2- Me too. 2.25- Nicklas Hjalmarrson and no, Patrick is sharing the apartment with Kimberly until his apartment gets worked on.

Thank you for your questions. I will reread and if they aren't clear enough, I will edit the story to make it so.

No, she's not suddenly madly in love with Patrick. Honestly, I think that's cheesy and ridiculous and that the best relationships start off as friends first. If I choose to write another story, it will likely follow a similiar progression.

1. I've never seen someone's eyes described as denim blue. 2. I like that she's southern and healthy in all the right places. 2. Who is Nicklas and he person who is sharing a house/apartment with then? (I'm just getting a toy. By confused with some of the supporting characters). 3. I really like the fact that the story started almost I progress, the characters were very familiar and it's a unique twist on a story that I really like and when I started reading it made me get into more. I can't wait for more, and I'm also happy that it's not rushed and she's not all of a sudden madly in love with Pat and they hooked up or something.

I cant wait for them to hook up!!!!