As a writer I total get where you're going because you could end it here because they end up together. By j really love Pat and your story TOO much to have it end here. I also think you're Vic story should feature Kim and pat maybe.
Just for y'all, i'll write more. I will forewarn you that chapters may be sporadic. I 'm getting ready to move into my first apartment and packing is a bear. Also, will likely not have internet there until sometime later in the month possibly into June. Going to work hard to hammer something out for you though.
No this cant be the last one. You should do more like a sequel or something. It could be like farther into their relationship or something if the problem is your getting bored. I like this story too much for it to be done.
OMG this chapter was so sweet! They all really love and I don't thinks he realizes the things in front of her face because she's SO used to doing everything for anyone and everyone else. So happy you got a chapter out, and can't wait for the next update!
@ Phedre Sorry, I meant in chapter 5 Pat's sisters were staff there were outed to Elina's and Nick's house for game night. Is that his girlfriend or something? And he's one of the teammates right?
@ bxgurl95 what party are you referring to? ( which chapter is it in?)
The only thing I can imagine you would get confused about is Nicklas Hjalmarsson vs. Patrick's girlfriend Nicki. (and in hindsight the girlfriend should have had a different, more recognizable name.)
@ bxgurl95 1- There's a first time for everything. :) 2- Me too. 2.25- Nicklas Hjalmarrson and no, Patrick is sharing the apartment with Kimberly until his apartment gets worked on.
Thank you for your questions. I will reread and if they aren't clear enough, I will edit the story to make it so.
No, she's not suddenly madly in love with Patrick. Honestly, I think that's cheesy and ridiculous and that the best relationships start off as friends first. If I choose to write another story, it will likely follow a similiar progression.
1. I've never seen someone's eyes described as denim blue. 2. I like that she's southern and healthy in all the right places. 2. Who is Nicklas and he person who is sharing a house/apartment with then? (I'm just getting a toy. By confused with some of the supporting characters). 3. I really like the fact that the story started almost I progress, the characters were very familiar and it's a unique twist on a story that I really like and when I started reading it made me get into more. I can't wait for more, and I'm also happy that it's not rushed and she's not all of a sudden madly in love with Pat and they hooked up or something.