This was a really sweet story I like your writing style or though it was a tiny bit rushed but still really good. I love your characters and the story in a whole. my only advice would be to maybe put them all in to one or two chapters? other then that it was very well written.
This is actually too adorable already! I really can't wait to start seeing this story develop and I hope that it's so adorable that it makes me squee. Already though, I love it so much. I love how already, even though he barely knows this other dude, he's already all smiley over him.
This is a brilliant beginning. It gives me more reason to red further. I want - need - to know who this person is that needs to be seen again and again and again.