Yes !! This was soo good!! I long for vivid dreams like this... Minus the whole vampire thing, well mostly anyway. Haha. Great job! And I loved the ending:D
dear lord they are devastatingly attractive! AND SO WAS THIS CHAPTER! i'm glad you found a way to make it work.. that was freaking hot! can't wait to see if they really lose control or not!
Best sandwich ever. Lol. Great chapter. I'm having mixed feelings about the next one being the last. I can't wait, but at the same time I'm sad it's ending. Lol.
Oh my goodness. That. I just can't even think about how she must feel. First fearfull. Then confusion and then ready to jump into the sack with them. But I do love it lol
This was by far one of the best beginnings to any story I've read. I'm in love with this story already. If this chapter is any indication as to how wonderful the rest of the chapters will you will definitely win! (Not that I ever doubted you wouldn't win. Lol)