The Second Time You Fall In Love - Comments

laredo. (100)

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Let me just start out with how gorgeous the layout is. Then the writing of the story was great. It seemed personal. This was a lovely story altogether. I loved it. <3

June 13th, 2013 at 10:00pm

deciding (100)

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I'm a big fan of your writing and this is no exception. Amazing job, as always.

May 17th, 2013 at 05:08am

kaitlynpalmtrees (100)

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absolutely adorable! i loved it!

May 9th, 2013 at 04:59pm

contemplating.you (100)

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I loved it:)

May 9th, 2013 at 08:00am

LoveGame13 (100)

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This is great! I didn't read the article after my first real love. He did a number on me emotionally, like Adam did to Emerson. But, I knew that there were and are better things out there. I thank him for breaking my heart, so I could fall in love with a better person. You captured this so elequently. Seriously one of the best one-shots I have ever read!

May 9th, 2013 at 05:37am

Matt Murray (100)

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This was beautiful. It has a beautiful layout and I absolutely love how you developed Emerson's character. I would have liked a little more Luke but definitely a WONDERFUL read!

May 9th, 2013 at 04:51am