Burned at Both Ends. - Comments

Dani needs to tell Chris about seeing Damien hes gonns get mad that Devin and Alex know before he does :/

Yay, allie is coming into the story! (Sorry I fangirl over her, she is perfect) dude Damien needs to die like now bc I hate him.
Can't wait for more

Update soon!

HAHAHA That made me so happy I open the comments and BOOM the first thing i see is Ricky's beautiful smile! c: I've found my happiness today!

My favourite part of this chapter was how devin showed Dani his sister's grave, I Just feel like that was a really special moment for them. Also the idea of Devin as a father sorta makes me smile c: I'm curious too see how the birth will play out too be honest I have a really bad feeling about it :s

It didn't suck Lau Lau c:

@ colorfultears

Both of your updates were really good! They never suck stop being so hard on yourselves! This story is so different from all the other vampire/demon stories ive read thats why its my favorite. You guys are really such good authors :)

@ squidgyyo
We try. Though she tends to get a little meh with all the drama I add lol.

See, this is why I love you guys as writers. You always change it up, have different things happen ya know as to where other authors keep the same things going.

@ squidgyyo
I doubt it. I think my co-author will be upset if I kill Dani off, if she isn't upset with me when she reads this chapter, since I didn't discuss some of the drama stuff wit her. If anything, Dani will probably be changed into a full vampire if she happens to die during birth.

If dani dies ill be super pissed and super sad. I feel like you guys are gonna kill Dani, idk why but I have a feeling. Please don't kill dani i like her character.
Update soon

Wow, this chapter was long and intense and a little bit of cute. I love it! I love how she named the girl Kylie, Stupid Ryan knows that Devin doesn't like drugs but stilled smoked. I still think Dani should get rid of the 'baby' I am not a fan of abortion but if it causes drama for chris and dani and it was a product of rape I think she should get rid of it.
I cant wait to see what happens.

Don't feel bad. It made one hell of a plot twist.

@ foREVer-a-creature
I kind of fucked Lauren over because of it. She doesn't know where to go with the next chapter because I left it at an awkward place and I feel bad. But don't worry, Chris is going to calm his shit eventually. He's just frustrated.

I really want to beat the fuck out of Chris right now. Just because she got raped and is pregnant by a vampire, doesn't mean he has to be a jackass and threaten to leave her if she doesn't get an abortion. I want her to keep the baby, but I also want her and Chris to stay together. Just oh my shit, what an outstanding cliffhanger. I honestly have never wanted to break my computer because I want to know what happens next as much as I do now. You girls just keep on updating when you can. Ya'll are both amazing authors. I love you both. <3 :D

@ piercethehotpockets
Agreed! I feel bad for thinking it should be aborted but if she has the baby all hell will break lose and then a war will start. It's just the smartest option she has righ now

Whoa I didn't see that coming o.o great chapter tho :D

This didnt suck at all! It was suuuper long and i did not see her being pregnant coming!! Or Chris threatening to leave her omfg this was such a good update

i feel like the baby should be aborted, but ya know... that's just my opinion .-.

@ lostinthecityofsin
lol I see what you did there

@ WakeUpTheSleepers
Not everyone's faithful, Creature or not lmao ;)