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I'm not gonna lie, I inwardly groaned when comment swap sent me here and I had to read the prequel. And whilst I'm a huge comic book nerd, I'm not a fan of reading comic fanfics, but I was pleasantly surprised with this one. For once the spelling and grammar were on point. The detail was adequate, not too much fluff. Interesting name, Eyfrida, but shit, in the marvel world you can have whatever name you want, amiright? Anyways, good job booboo.

Came from comment swap. :)

I am going to say this right off the bat- while I am a huge fan of The Avengers, I honestly don't read very many stories with Loki because they're normally written by little squealing fangirls who get his personality all wrong and the whole thing turns out to be an annoying flop.
THIS, however, caught my interest as soon as I started reading it. The detail you've put into your paragraphs and the descriptions of everything is really nice. I also like how your new character, Eyfrida, isn't from the same place in Asgard as either Loki or Thor. It provides a nice little change in what we can expect from the whole plot.
Also, you pretty much kept Loki in character the whole time. This is what I have to seriously commend you on. You have made me a very happy reader. So, guarantee that I'll be reading more of this when you update. Wonderful, wonderful job. :)

Your story is actually very well written. The orange is a bit straining on the eyes, but that might be because I'm reading it at 4 a.m
I like you sentence structure and think you're very good at writing a serious theme. It just seems aged and mystical to me, which is how I'd expect a fan fic about ancient gods to be. Good job!!

I come from comment swap!

I am terribly sorry to admit, but I never got into this fandom, nor do I even know what it is about....I'm sorry I can't really contribute too great of a comment :c

But I think you are a really great writer, and I will recommend the story for you in apology!

Comment swap-

Okay, I'm not very into Loki and Thor, even though fanfiction is myself. I can't say I really liked it, but you're a fantastic writer. I love how it flowed. It didn't feel rushed at all. I plan on recc'ing it for you. Good job.

I was glad I found this through comment swap I'm not usually into fan fiction but I liked this one a lot! I like your writing style and I feel sympathetic towards Loki though initially he's supposed to be a bad guy. It flowed quite well and didn't feel rushed so I think you're doing quite well so far! Gonna subscribe and rec for you.

*Comment Swap*
First off, I love Thor!!! He's one of my favorite heros! Captain America is my favortie though(: Anyways, I love your writing style! It flows smoothly and even though you said the chapter went a little quickly, I thought it was perfect! The only thing I would suggest is making the font a little bigger! I had to squint a little to read! Love the layout though!!