I thought it was really well written. I wish you used more detail. Especially leading up to the climax. Like, maybe talking a little more about how they became friends and using examples from their past; you kind of just summarized it which is fine, but it's just an opinion. But other than that, I really liked it. I'd read more of you fanficions, granted you'd cotinue to write. You totally should.
May 9th, 2013 at 04:17am
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