Leaving Miami - Comments

  • MoonGoddess13

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    Aw how cute; Danny and Balir are adorable. I really think you should continue this. Have Blair start in Miami then go to NYC after Speed's death. But great three-shot :D Loved it.

    Although I do recommend you get a beta to check things over. But i hope you write more :)
    September 15th, 2013 at 12:20am
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    When I start it then yeah you can. I just need to find the episodes and stuff and i'm good to go. And Ron Saris was a criminal, Horatio's personal rival, and also Julia Winston (Kyle's mom and Horatio's ex girlfriend) ex-husband.

    And yay! I'll read it right now. And i probably will enjoy it :)
    September 15th, 2013 at 12:14am
  • whiteLighter90

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    @ MoonGoddess13
    Sounds nice, but sadly I don't remember Ron Saris :( It's been a while now since I've watched the show. But where can I read your story?
    So just for you I've posted the last chapter now ^^ I had it on my computer and its the slowest thing on earth so I avoid working with it xD Well anyway, it's late here in Finland so I better go to sleep, I hope you enjoy the end :D
    September 14th, 2013 at 09:55pm
  • MoonGoddess13

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    It is. I have my own OC for CSI Miami, except she didn't leave Miami and she had Speed's son; and if you remember Ron Saris from later seasons, i have her as his daughter, lol talk about a twist. And yeah I saw your Quizilla profile, and yay! Can't wait to read it :) And your welcome.
    September 14th, 2013 at 08:38pm
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    @ MoonGoddess13
    Tim dying is really sad. The reason this is just a three part thing is because it was a request from a reader on quizilla(it was supposed to be a oneshot thing). But being me and having the story idea in my head for a long time I thought it would fit perfectly to what was requested and it spilled out into three parts. I've actually had the last part written for some time now and I thought I had posted it but obviously not xD Bangin
    I'll post it as soon as I get to my computer :P
    Thank you for your comment! :)
    September 14th, 2013 at 08:01pm
  • MoonGoddess13

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    Oh god that's sad :( With Speed and everything. But at least she gets another shot at love. And i'm surprised you didn't do a whole series with this. You know starting out with her in Miami then her ending up in NYC. Well can't wait to read the next part. Update soon! :D
    September 14th, 2013 at 03:17am