Playing for Keeps - Comments

I'm soooo glad you started writing this!!! It is amazing!

YAY! It's up! Been checking almost every day :D To simply be more than a yes-man, telling you how much I love the story all the time, let me talk about your writing. I'm a writer myself, and finding a *good* fan fiction story is something that's always frustrated me. Seemed like no one could spell, punctuate, or had believable characters. You, my dear writer friend, have all of those and more. Seriously. "Almost Perfect" was so great, and I'm saying that from a writing standpoint. Aside from a few tense changes, punctuation errors, or other minor discrepancies, your writing is clean and polished. I can tell you put thought into how you write or structure things, and your set ups and payoffs are great! Keep at it!

Ha! I knew it! She was playing him all along!

LOVE THIS ALREADY! Update soon please! I hope they get back together soon! I can feel something good brewing!!!