So dude. Sick story, I gotta say. As everyone else here, I don't really know a whole lot about Transformers, but this was wicked. I really liked all your descriptive language. I felt like I could actually see everything you were describing. I don't want to be a dick, but yeah there were a few grammatical errors, but nothing fatal, I assure you. Just a few words missing the "ed's" at the ends, no biggie. Over all, I was real impressed with your vocabulary. It seemed vey vast, and I myself like a vast vocabulary. I don't really understand the whole "Season 1" and so on, thing you were talking about. Is this like a T.V show or something? Either way, it was very entertaining. I really liked when Swindle said "What the slag?" lol it reminded me of something my brother would say, and he's a pretty funny guy so there you go. It was interesting because you made it seem like the Transformers were real people. Yes, you were that descriptive, I was beginning to think of Swindle as just a regular old, smart-ass dude. Swindle seems like a cool bot. I'm interested to see where his adventures and silver tongue will take him. Keep it up man!
August 22nd, 2014 at 06:15am