Eat. - Comments

Poor Mabel. I didn't think I could possibly hate a character as much as I hate Mario right now, and I really hope he doesn't get to Ellie before the police find him.

Oh yay! Things are getting good now. I'm so happy for them. I just can't wait to see what happens to Mario and Mabel.

Ahhh! I swear I cried :( I hope to god that she starts eating and they send the dick with legs to jail for the resting of his fucking life for hurting her and his sister.

I love this story, I hope her and brian get together soon!

Awww! I'm so glad things are finally out on the table now, and I hope they beat the crap out of Mario for hurting his sister and Ellie. And I agree with HerNameIsAlice, maybe it could be a chapter in third person, just describing what goes on in Mario's home or something.

Do you think you can make something in Mario's or Mabel's point of view? I want to see what's going on. I'm so interested in Mabel now. It's so sad to read what that douche does.

Oh no! Ughhh I hate Mario soooo much! -_- Poor Ellie. And poor Mabel. I hope she does something about it soon, or Brian needs to save her. Anyways, update more!

Okay, please update asap. I loved this and I want more Ellie and Brian x_x

Okay, I am in LOVE with this story. Please, PLEASE update this soon.

Love love love this story. (: I'm a new reader, and I'm really enjoying it so far! One of my best friends used to have anorexia, so I remember exactly what it was like to have a friend who wouldn't eat.
P.S. I love that Jimmy's baby's name is Emilia. (: That's my name. It's a damn good one if I do say so myself. (;

Love love love this story. (: I'm a new reader, and I'm really enjoying it so far! One of my best friends used to have anorexia, so I remember exactly what it was like to have a friend who wouldn't eat.
P.S. I love that Jimmy's baby's name is Emilia. (: That's my name. It's a damn good one if I do say so myself. (;

Well, hello there fellow Sherlock fan! Can we fangirl over this latest series?! Haha

Loved chapter 9, so playful! But why didn't he tell Ellie that they kissed? Damn you, Brian! Uh oh, I think Brian is cottoning on to Ellie's eating habits, or lack of. I really like this story, can't wait to read more! :D

I can't tell you how happy I was to see that you updated. I was wondering where this story went but I'm so glad you updated. :D I wish Brian would have told her the truth. But at least McKenna is adorable. Update soon pleaseeee.

I love that they finally kissed! I am so in love with this story! Please update soon!

I love this (:

Finally! kjgnkjdg They finally kissed! I wish she didn't feel so bad about it though. Poor girl. I'm getting really tired of Mario. :/

Aw yay! I can't wait to see what they come up with to get rid of Mario. Ugh I can't stand him. I bet Jimmy's baby is super adorable and I can't wait to see more of her too. Update soon!

I love this already! I think Brian and Ellie's relationship is so lovely, he loves her, but she doesn't see it, whihc is sad cause I think they would make a great couple! I love the dialogue, the banter between the guys and Brian and Ellie. And I'm sorry, but can Mario go face plant a shovel? Several times? Ugh. Hate him. I LOVED Brian talking to his baby sister, that was SO CUTE!! I'm really looking forward to seeing how this pans out, I hope she dumps Mario's ass and eats something substantial soon!

Looking forward to the next update and I shall go check out your other story! :D

I've just read all of the chapters so far and I'm loving it, I can't wait to see where you take it!

Oh my~! I'm enjoying this so far and all I've read is just the first chapter. She really needs to dump Mario lol.