My Castle - Comments

@FuckingMaleficent, rechlacks is just a nown, and I plan to edit it a couple times with the grammatical errors. Especially my spelling as it is my fatal flaw. Thanks for the feed back, and please come back to read it once I redo the edits.

Love it so far. There are just a few things that could use some correcting.
1. Except in this sentence: 'she began to except this as her world,' should be ACCEPT
2. 'With his teeth he tore the cork' could use a comma between teeth and he
3. 'molasses like' should be hyphenated (molasses-like)
4. Gapping in this: '...three inch gapping hole...' should be GAPING
5. '...ree branches did his en...' could use a comma between branches and did
6. 'rechlacks' needs to be capitalized
7. '...ge gray blue wh...' GRAY-BLUE
8. '...re rechlacks, but all t...' capitalize RECHLACKS