Not What It May Seem - Comments

@ HerNameIsAlice
Thats what my sister said when she read it too. I started laughing becasue of the look on her face

Derek is an asshole. So is Bitchelle.

@ HerNameIsAlice
You will just have to wait for the next update to find out. But the next chapter is one of my favorites.

Ugh is that Michelle? -.-

@ HerNameIsAlice
Thank you i have been having trouble coming up with names.

I like Gage. Or Plague. I wanna name a baby girl Plague. Or anyone for that matter. Haha.

@ HerNameIsAlice
I am working on chapter 12 right now. It should be up either late tonight or in the morning. I am glad you like the story.

Update again! I need to know what happens next!
Please.....

love this please update soon

Oops... My lappy went retarded... <3?
x4 messages. Hahahaha.

Oops... My lappy went retarded... <3?
x4 messages. Hahahaha.

10 tattoo's? Damn, and here I thought I had too many... Well, by the time I'm in my early 20's I'll probably have nearly that many... -_- Sad that her mom died from Cancer. :(

10 tattoo's? Damn, and here I thought I had too many... Well, by the time I'm in my early 20's I'll probably have nearly that many... -_- Sad that her mom died from Cancer. :(

10 tattoo's? Damn, and here I thought I had too many... Well, by the time I'm in my early 20's I'll probably have nearly that many... -_- Sad that her mom died from Cancer. :(

10 tattoo's? Damn, and here I thought I had too many... Well, by the time I'm in my early 20's I'll probably have nearly that many... -_- Sad that her mom died from Cancer. :(

I wish my dad was in a famous band... not just any band, but a rock one. <3 Avenged Sevenfold is awesome!! Other than a few typo issues which can easily be fixed, (No one is perfect, as a writer myself I know this.) the story was actually really well written. Can't wait to read and comment on the other chapters, too. ;)

update soon love love love this

Loved it!!

Can't wait for the update...

i am in the middle of writing the 4th chapter right now.