August 16th, 2013 at 12:52am
@ sobre mi cadaver
Thank you for do my wish first off, it made me really happy!
thank you for noticing my mistakes, I knew something was off but I couldn't pinpoint exactly what it was. I'm not the best with understanding all the grammar rule (especially with staying in the same tense) but once again your editing skills are awesome
I will be fixing those errors soon hopefully,
thanks! :)
What I mean by that is that the descriptions were written well enough to make me feel like I was there and that's a good thing if you can evoke emotion in your reader. You should be proud of that.
This story was very refreshing in the sense that I liked this even though I wouldn't normally read a story like this. You left the ending open-ended which was great and I like the mystery in this. Good job.