I haven't read this story, not a Big Ben fan at all, but just wanted to let you know this is posted in the hockey section, and it's about football... I feel like your target audience is under a different mibba section. It might improve your read count?
So I've gone past this story a few times and hadn't read it. But I was looking for something new to read, and decided what the heck. So although I'm not really a football fan. I'm really liking the story!!!! Though I have to admit that the flashback's did go on a little too long, it was nice to know Nikki and Ben's back story. But I was more than happy when it got back to the story.
I really think Nikki is pregnant and thought so from the 1st chapter!!!!