October 29th, 2013 at 05:28am
Your descriptions are flawless. You've created such a unique story, and added so many amazingg descriptions that made it feel like this story had actually happened. Like this silvery man had actually turned into buutterflies and flown away. It was really great.
I do agree with fascination though, some parts did seem a bit choppy and broke the flow just a little bit. It was mostly near the beginning for me, when you were talking about the cold.
Gorgeous story though. Amazing job!
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I love everything about this.
A beautiful layout and a tragically haunting tone.
It's a beautiful story and I love it so much. ♥