Beyond the Blood - Comments

Great chapter
Update soon

Update. Soon

so good
you have me curious

@ St-Jimmy

Wouldn't really have it any other way. Looking forward to the weekend, or hopefully soon after. :)

@ ALICEonCLOUDnine

Heh, you might have to wait a bit longer for suspense breakers but a new update should be out at the weekend sometime! :) Thanks for the comment!

An interesting take on the story, I really like it! I'm having a love-hate relationship with the way you're building suspense! I need to know more ASAP! Can't wait for the next update.

@ wolfprincess1995 - thank you very much! :D Next update should be out on Wednesday...

I am hooked. Please update I need to know what is happening.

I really like this story, and I can't wait to read more!

@ Let It Fall - thanks for your comment! It should get better after the next chapter. I wrote Ch's 1-3 intitially in 1st Person and then later tried to convert to 3rd, as opposed to rewriting the whole thing ('cause I'm lazy that way). Ch 4 onwards were written in 3rd from the outset so they should be better!

@ wolfprincess1995 - Thanks for the comment! And as to my excuses about 1st/3rd person, please see the comment above! :)

I love the story and find it well written, but the "her" and "she" to "I" and "Me" is confusing. I personally love the third person part instead of first. but the story is great over all!

I really like it so far, but it gets kind of confusing when it keeps going from "I" to "her". Not so confusing that it's hard to understand, but it does take longer. Just thought I'd let you know. But I definitely can't wait to read more! :)