Little Demon Girl - Comments

I honestly didn't think anyone was still reading it but if you want more I know exactly where this story ends. I might go back and rewrite somethings but I could post more if you want.

I know this was written a few years ago.....but I'm sooo curious to know what happens....any decision to finish it???

Thank you so much I wrote it on my phone so it might have auto-corrected, and I'll explain everything promise.

This was good. I'm fandom blind here so I'll only be commenting on the story itself. I found this perusing through the front page, and, since it's a fanfiction in the same genres I'm writing (crime, thriller, etc) I thought I'd give it a shot.

I like the main character. She's got a tough life but seems to be strong however. The paragraph spacing was a bit off and there were some spelling errors but nothing that can't be fixed. I can't believe her parents allow her brothers to beat her without saying anything. That's messed up... I hope to see it explained more as the story progresses.. :/