Escape - Comments

@ sexinthepenbox~ Awww well thank you. I've been debating doing a Johnny T full length story for awhile. But every time I start something new or come up with an idea with a story he just doesn't seem to fit in . But I may at some point (no promises) do something more with these 2. We'll just have to see!!!!!

How is this not a full story? So good.

I really liked this. I too wish it was longer! Well done :)

I just read this. I wish it wasn't a one shot. I think this would make a great storyline. There's clearly a past with the characters and possibly a future. You should really consider it. :)

A few grammatical errors but nothing too bad! Simple layout, but well done. Good luck!