Chasing Foxtails - Comments

WOOD

OH MY GOODNESS AS SOON AS I READ TOUJOURS PUR I HAD TO COME FIND MORE THIS IS GREAT YOU'RE GREAT

WOOD

OH MY GOSH

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS IS AMAZING!

OH MY GOSH IM IN LOVE ALREADY

well this looks briiiiillliant.

I was browsing through the story section this morning and came across this. I live very close to Glasgow, so I decided I would pop into the story page and see what it was about and boy am I glad I did!

I've always been a massive fan of Harry Potter and I was always gutted the Oliver Wood just seems to disappear off of the face of the earth after the first couple of books, so I'm really excited to see where you're going to take this. Even in a short space, Grace has already turned into a really three-dimensional character. She seems lovely, but she has mentioned her temper which could probably be considered a major flaw in a lot of people. I feel in that way that I can relate to her, which is awesome. Your description is lovely and your sentence structuring is really flawless. I don't think I have any complaints about this at all so far.

I'm really glad I stumbled upon this, because it looks as if it'll shape out to be a great story. Keep it up!