I just wanted to start off by saying I'm currently reading your story and I have to comment on your layout. I have a love hate relationship with it. I love how it goes with your story and how the banner and background work together. However as much as I secretly love that you used contour line drawing as your background I also hate it with passion. Simply because my junior and senior year of highschool art contour line drawings were the bane of my existence.
Now about your story. I love it, it's so ... it's beautifully written but it's haunting. I keep reading more and more and I just keep wanting more. Please update soon.
I am completely entranced in this story, it is so well written, kudos for that. I can not wait to read the next chapter, but I hope you know that chapter seven and eight are the same. :)
Oh, I love this story so, so much. It's absolutely wonderful and divine and beautiful and gah. I love it. I love Clay and I love Annie and I love it all. Gimme more.
I really like this story and I love that he calls her kitten because that's what I like to be called :b Can't wait for you to update again! Hopefully there will be longer chapters in the future :)
Of course I mean read.
Wow that's a weird mistake oops