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  • AliMeansWings

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    @ cdas42121
    Thank you so much!
    August 29th, 2013 at 09:09am
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    Ive only finished chapter 2 and so far i really like it. Im interested, wish the show was real, laughing, it's all awesome so far
    August 29th, 2013 at 05:25am
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    This was amazing (: I literally spent my whole day reading this, I was hooked from the very beginning!
    July 14th, 2013 at 06:10am
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    @ atomika wave.
    Thank you. Smile I wrote this story a while ago on FanWorks, and to be honest, the epilogue ending was a case of my being tired of writing it. Lol.
    July 4th, 2013 at 03:48am
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    Didn't really like the epilogue ending, felt like it couldve gone on longer but overall this story was simply amazing and one of my all time favorites yay! :)
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:44am
  • cellardoor0789

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    Fantastic!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 02:04pm
  • AliMeansWings

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    @ Fadingdreams
    I'm afraid not. But thank you. Smile
    July 2nd, 2013 at 08:43am
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    0.0 is there going to be a sequel?
    July 2nd, 2013 at 08:35am
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    Loved this story! It was different yet entertaining. Great job!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:11am
  • bxgurl95

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    oh wow the end. That was a whirlwind story and I loved every minute of it. Write more!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 02:01am
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    Ok you're right I feel a little better about her after that chapter so I can't be upset that her and Matt want each other. I just feel bad for Brian :/
    June 30th, 2013 at 09:53pm
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    @ bxgurl95
    Lol. That's very true.
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:56am
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    @ MoneCloveR
    I like that you critique your writing and characters. I mean you made her true to get character that doesn't make her like-able lol
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:35am
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    @ bxgurl95
    I have to admit, this is one of the few characters I've ever written that I'm not totally in love with! I mean, I wrote her as a meek and mild submissive girl, but she got on my own nerves at times. And I think you'll be a little bit happier with her in the next chapter... just a little. Wink
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:49pm
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    @ its_tee_time.
    Thank you so much! I think the next chapter will pleasantly surprise you. Very Happy
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:47pm
  • bxgurl95

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    "I feel bad I should go speak to him" -_- no bitch you should grow some balls and fricken go talk to him. She's pathetic and excited by sex but doesn't know a real relationship. Matt physically threatened Brian and all she can ask is how is he -_- I'm all for everyone discovering themselves sexually and all that, but damn girl.
    I love this story lol *tee hee*
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:44pm
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    Don't get me wrong, i love Alexis and Matt together, but I hate that she's so submissive. It's disturbing. I don't really feel bad for Brian, he's just a paw anyway. He needs to find someone else to obsess over.
    I'm sad that the story ends soon, it was worth waiting for you to update. You are such a talented writer.
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:29pm
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    @ MoneCloveR
    Not at all!
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:12am
  • AliMeansWings

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    @ bxgurl95
    I love that your comments are so honest. Most people who read this are all for Matt and Alexis, but it's really not a very healthy relationship, is it? Smile
    June 26th, 2013 at 05:12pm
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    Girls kill me. I mean he's showing some promised and changed a bit but she's giving in very easily. They still aren't anything but they both want it. I feel bad for Brian :(
    June 26th, 2013 at 04:49pm
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