Last Hope - Comments

@ DisasterInLife
The girl who died was Alex's best friend and the page Jack found was an entry in Alex's diary/something he wrote

I don't really understand. Whobwas the girl who died. And was it her note Jak found or Alex's?

@ nicoleTALI
Oh, no not at all :) Thank you! I'll try to post it early next week or earlier if possible :) x

@ fyeahflint okat good i wasnt sure how i had come across but im glad i wasnt being bossy! i am very ecited to read it now;) ill be looking out for it! x

@ nicoleTALI
Thank you! You're not being bossy at all, it's a really good suggestion, thank you! I think I might actually do that, I might make it a chapter or a few chapters before hand so you get a backstory :)

Thank you for loving this though :) xx

i really think you should turn this into a chatered fic, and i think you should write it almost like a prequal? like what happened t alex, like what led to this, like what led the situation they are in this? and then make this one shot like a middle chapter? and then go on and write what happens after :) its just becasue in another comment you said you didnt really know where to go with it? well yeah, if you write like a backstory to it then it would be easier to write what happens after :)

i dont mean that to be like bosy or whatever, it is litterally like just a suggestion and i tink it would be really interesting to read it like that, like knowing that alex is gonna be depressed and sicidal eventually and just seeing how he became that wy and then seeing him get better as well. but as i said, its just a suggestion. if you do decide to turn this into a chaptered fic, do what yo want with it, ill read it anyway,

but in short i really loved this and wold love if you made it chaptered. xx

@ mawganzola
Yay, I'm glad you're happy! :)

@ CyanidePromises
Thank you! I'll make into a chaptered fic somehow, i'm sort of stuck on where to go from this

I really like this >.< it's just fjcyndlgdy words I hope you actually turn this into a chaptered fic it would be absolutely awesome

yayayyayay this news makes me happy!! **high fives you and feeds you cupcakes**

@ mawganzola
Thank you! Just for your comment, I think i'll make it into a chaptered fic, somehow :)

asdfghjkl;' I reaaallllyyyy liked this, so please, if you want, make this into a chaptered fic **crosses fingers and hopes** :D