Someone Else's Angel - Comments

*Comment Swap*
I really liked this! It's a really interesting idea and I think it has loads of potential. I love the way you describe and the way you created Jeremy's character. Good job! I recommended :D

I have to agree with anticlimactic.syn, your intro is the perfect attention grabber! After I read it, I KNEW that I just HAD to read your story. I don't usually read past the intro if it doesn't hook me in, and yours definitely did! I can't wait until you update! I love its direction! Subscribed&Rec'ed :)

Right off the bat the intro screamed that this would be very bittersweet. It's a real attention grabber, though still simple and to the point. I like how Jeremy's actually kind of a jerk in the beginning, and that we got a little insight on Beth in the first chapter. I'm looking forward to how she deals with his death, and how Jeremy's character develops. Seriously, keep writing this.

DUDE I'm here from comment swap and I'm so glad it brought me here. I wrote something like this once, for my English Coursework but damn you did it so much better than I did. Plus he's actually dead and my character came back as a guardian angel anyway that is unimportant. This is brilliant. The way you write is so pretty and descriptive and I swear to god your summary broke my heart and I'm so scared about what is going to happen I mean I want them to end up together but that is seriously not possible and argh! I want to know! Keep up the brilliant work!

I just love this story! Its so different from previous ones i haave read and i enjoy that fact. I think it gives aa new take on romance. Just like the others below say, you gave just enough information. I cant wait to see how this plays out

Subscribed and recommended.
I really like it so far, and can't wait to see Jeremy's journey in the afterlife. And I agree with Jim Moriarty, your descriptions are amazing with out being overdone. You're a wonderful writer. Update soon, love.

From the comment swap.
I love the way your write. Your details are amazing, and they really explain what's going on without being overwhelming. You've found a great balance. I also love the plot of this story. It's so sweet and cute, and I'm looking forward to reading this story to the end; it's great. And plus, good choice on the angel's name being Gabriel (I'm a huge Supernatural fan and that made me smile big time, okay).
Keep up the good work; I'm subscribing!