Like a Shot of Heroin - Comments

Hey, my name is Brittany and I'm finally here to judge for the Chains, Whips, and Fetishes - Oh My! Contest.

Where to begin. I haven't really read many horror-esque type stories like this, especially stories that fall into a fetish/smutt-y type genre. I think you did very well with your descriptions and with your dialogue. The details you used were amazing, and I adored reading about his addiction to blood and how he normally carried out his killing "ritual", I guess is what I could call it. It's stories like these that remind you how creepy and off some men can be. I love that he was able to get the girl that he had been after, the girl that smelled so very sweet and delectable. Another thing, you didn't get too personal with the victim, this way I didn't get a sense of feeling sorry for her. I also loved how you talked about him getting turned on by the sight, smell, and taste of blood. It sounded natural, and not so awkward. (Which when some stories talk about a guy's pants tightening it can be really awkward to read.) So, all in all, I think the story was a very good read! You did a great job!

Thank you so much for entering this unique piece into my contest.

Hey, my name is Brittany and I'm finally here to judge for the Chains, Whips, and Fetishes - Oh My! Contest.

Where to begin. I haven't really read many horror-esque type stories like this, especially stories that fall into a fetish/smutt-y type genre. I think you did very well with your descriptions and with your dialogue. The details you used were amazing, and I adored reading about his addiction to blood and how he normally carried out his killing "ritual", I guess is what I could call it. It's stories like these that remind you how creepy and off some men can be. I love that he was able to get the girl that he had been after, the girl that smelled so very sweet and delectable. Another thing, you didn't get too personal with the victim, this way I didn't get a sense of feeling sorry for her. I also loved how you talked about him getting turned on by the sight, smell, and taste of blood. It sounded natural, and not so awkward. (Which when some stories talk about a guy's pants tightening it can be really awkward to read.) So, all in all, I think the story was a very good read! You did a great job!

Thank you so much for entering this unique piece into my contest.

I just love reading your horror stories, they're simply amazing! This was so descriptive and detailed and dark and disturbing, I loved it! Don't know what that says about me, then again we are Satan's best creations! XD
Awesome job hunny!

Oh my the last chapter. So creepy and awesome. Well done :-)

Holy crap...creepy Jimmy is really fucking creepy! There was so much detail in this one honey bunch, I'm sure that you'll do amazingly well in this contest! I'm rooting for ya, even though I think I'm entered into the same one. This was amazing honey!

Oh my. I wonder if anyone will ever find his victims. Very well written. Loved it.