Game On - Comments

U spelled hash tag wrong! And this is a hash tag: #
But thanks!!:) I'm reposting my mistakes! Thx for letting me know <3

Epic and radical so far!
~ you know who it's the yolo girl!
Hashtage!

@ loversandfriends
That's exactly what I was thinking!:) don't want them to fall for each other too fast...
Thank you soooo much it means a lot!
Xxx
Khloe

oo i absolutely love this thing so far and i am not always that interested in fan fics. But this story got me with only the first chapters c: i saw no grammar errors but i do think you may have repeated a sentence or two in chapter two. It was a bit confusing but i managed cx try not to move things to fast between the future love birds; it'll be hard to have many chapters if they fall in love too soon. Good job