THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOOOD. OMG. Congrats! You're like a poster-child writer! lol :) I was also just fangirling for a moment, since, in fact, my name is Olivia ;)
Awwe I think it's kinda hard to imagine Zack teach a little girl how to skate board.. but if it were to actually happen it would be cute nonetheless ♥ but seriously another cliffhanger..?