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Awesome story!! I hope you update soon! :)

My god, I feel so bad and it's not even real! Haha. I'm so sorry! XD

I agree, I think Zacky has a huge crush on her and I can see him and Matt fighting over her in the not too distant future!

Poor girl, she's gotten her heart ripped out :( but she needed to know

More soon! :D

Damn I knew Travis was sleeping around with the slut. Why the hell would he go for the town slut when he had Ari. God only knows how many others she's sleeping with.

This chapter is so sad, even though I'm glad that Matt's told her the truth and he and Zacky are there for her. I can still see them fighting over her though.

oh damn it why'd you go and make zacky cute all of a sudden?? not that I think that he should get a chance with Ari though *cough cough* it's obvious that he reeeeally likes her.. BUT so does Matt so....

aawe damn it all to hell!! Matt's ex is a real bitch and Travis needs his balls chopped off moahahah

Oh poor Ari, she's still hung up on her husband who's been cheating his butt off! I'm excited to see how she handled this, hopefully she didn't just roll over and take it!

oh damn everything is happening at once. I think Travis has been cheating on her with Rachel for some time and he's used Matt kissing her as a chance to get some easy action with the town slut.

Looks like Matt has some competition from Zacky and I can't wait to read more :-)

The plot thickens indeed!
Oh god, I feel so bad! Even though it's a fictional character I feel like such a bitch! Haha
I mean, we could always swap, I'll gladly take Matt or Zacky haha

Poor Arianna Travis was a bit premature in wanting a separation wasn't he? He did actually sleep with someone else! He doesn't have very good morals. Hmm, maybe it was to get with Rachel/me, this is so confusing! Haha

Great update! Can't wait for more!

Omg! Crazy awesome update!!! I love how Zacky just swept in and took charge. I just hope that she listens to Matt whatever he has to say. Can't wait for the next update!!!

ya know as soon as I read Zacky my mind started screaming "Nooo!! not that green-eyed charmer he's gonna try and take ari away from matt!!" hahahahah

ooh thought it sounded weird that travis would want to seperate over a simple quick kiss.. guess he's got a bigger reason- a blonde.. poor ari.. and poor mattie- his ex doesn't sound like a very nice woman..

oh hell all the shit's about to hit the fan. Yeah, Matt may have figured that because Ari's married he'd step back and be her friend but it doesn't excuse him taking off without a word and not helping her at all with the band.

I hope Travis doesn't go apeshit at Ari as she hasn't done anything wrong

oh matt is so stupid but cute!
gah! woopsiiee!! travis just HAD to show up right in that moment.. heheheheh

Uh oh, Matt you'd better run and hide your sexy ass before Travis beats your ass! I have to say, I'm loving that I'm Matt's ex, means at one point I had sexy Sanders all to myself mwahaha!

It was a bit rude of him to just disappear on her though, although I think he didn't contact her on purpose, not wanting her to know he was with his ex. He can't keep messing her about though, one minute deciding he has feelings for her and the next just wanting to be friends, although I do think that's honourable of him considering she's already taken.

Can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for including me in this! :)

Trouble in paradise indeed! I don't know how I would be able to stay if some cheated on me...and then worked with that Person on a daily basis:( that would be rough! So yes I could totally see why she was pissed at Travis for trying to intervene with Matt! And speaking of Matt, he gets points for being so caring and helping her out like that. Can't wait to see what comes next:)

Oooh, interesting chapter! How lovely of Travis to assert himself so viciously. And kudos to Matt for not staying in her office with her, that was very sweet and carrying of him. Travis better hope he doesn't completely run Arianna into Matt's arms...can't wait for the next update!!

Travis had no right to warn Matt off her, especially because he's cheated before and having dinner with the woman you cheated with? Bad move man! If she's gonna get it on with Matt, no amount of Travis warning him off will stop them. He should trust her to stay faithful.

Having said that, I love the chemistry between Matt and Ari, it's electric! And he does seem to have sorted his head out realised what it is that he wants, or who rather. That was really sweet of him to check up on her and stay outside in his car, very gentlemanly of him.

I don't agree with cheating in any shape or form, so if she does decide to give into Matt, she needs to think long and hard about whether Matt is serious about her. I know her marriage isn't very good at the moment, but they got married for a reason.

I do love the idea of her and Matt together though, they have this wicked chemistry that you don't come across very often. Gah, I'm torn!

More soon, I love it! :D

aaweh matt is such a sweetheart!! i think it'd be really easy to fall for him if he keeps that up!! ooh so travis has cheated on her before? damn! so he's got NO room to talk then!.. that note matt left though, did he have to put the part about snoring on it?? hahaha so cute though!

I'm really liking this. The chemistry being them is sizzling, but things are going to get hella awkward now that Travis has seen the way that Matt is drooling over Ari.

Can't wait to read more

So I really like this so far! I have to say though that it seems like Matt is a bit confused on what he wants...Ari does as well. I cant wait to see where this goes.

LOVELY! i really enjoy this story so far and i cannot wait for more!

This is my first time reading this story and I'm so in love with it. I love the tension between Ari and Matt. Please update soon :)