Tonight - Comments

I am amazed at the peer awesomeness of this story. Loved the end bit :)

You need to continue writing this! I loved it and normally i hate smut stories. I love the poetry style of your writing it amazing.

LOOK. LOOK AT ME. I'M COMMENTING FINALLY. LOOK.

It’s dark and you’re beautiful.
Gah. I love this -- it ties in so well with > I don’t want your name. I want you. And I know you want me too.. BECAUSE HE JUST WANTS SOMEONE OKAY. AND HE'S BEAUTIFUL BECAUSE HE'S SOMEONE. RIGHT? RIGHT? (What am I even saying )

Yours are getting dangerously low on my back.
Ngf, I've always loved this image. Really sexy.

“Ryan…” I groan and you don’t seem to mind that it’s not your name. You just pull me closer.
SECKS WAS SO HOT AND THEN YOU DID THIS TO ME. WHO DO YOU EVEN THINK YOU ARE ALICE. RIPPING PEOPLE'S HEARTS OUT. I just want him to be happy And not-Ryan, because he seems like a nice guy, ya know? Putting up with that. Uh...

I make sure I don’t leave any of my things at your place, and then write you a small thank you note.
I'm pretty sure that's the saddest line I've ever read WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT? FIC COULD'VE BEEN COMPLETELY ANGSTY WITHOUT YOU PHYSICALLY MAIMING MY HEART.

I have no regrets about you.
So thanks.


Ryan just smiles before telling me he used the last of the coffee.
JESUS H CHRIST WHAT HAVE YOU DONE.

This comment marks the third time I've read this AND MY HEART IS STILL ACHING AND IT SHOULDN'T BUT YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE BECAUSE YOU'VE DONE SOMETHING TO MY SOUL WITH THIS FIC.

Oh my God.

O. M. F. G.
Ryan:(
Lol jk but yeah, me likey! Haha its not like usual story kind of writing but i love it cuz its different ithinks:):):):)

that was really beautiful and the end is just...oh my gosh!!! wow!! i love it :)

Okay, I read it now

ASDFGHJKL!! I CANT! I JUST CAN'T!!

AAAAHHHH!!!

I don't even understand what I don't understand!!! There are no words because it's just so tragic and not but yes but no but almost but always and my brain broke.

IT BROKE, GOD DAMMIT!

I don't know how to any more!!! I have lost my ability to any more!!!

I'm dead now. Goodbye.

@ What...
Ah! No, I forgot I could do that! I'm dumb.
It's late, okay? Don't mind me...

@ addesin
Did you try clicking the default layout button?

NOW COMMENTS:

I feel the body next to me vibrate with laughter.
That's the cutest description ever, what?

Fuck, you are perfect.


I don’t want your name. I want you. And I know you want me too.
THAT'S SO BEAUTIFUL IT'S LIKE... IT'S LIKE POETRY BUT IT'S NOT AND...

Your forehead’s pressing against mine and I can taste the beer on your breath.
NGF

“Ryan…” I groan and you don’t seem to mind that it’s not your name. You just pull me closer.
(So this could be tragic Ryden if Tracy wants it to be?)

I have no regrets about you.

So thanks.
OH GOD. JUST LET ME LOVE YOU.

“Don’t be stupid. You’ll find someone.”

Ryan just smiles before telling me he used the last of the coffee.
Dying. I am dying. pushing up daisies. six feet under. I WANT TO BE ABLE TO DO THIS IN ONE NIGHT BUT I CAN'T WHAT ARE YOU EVEN YOU SUPERBEING?

I wanna read but I caaant D': The layout is weird on my computer and it's all squished to one size and it cuts off the last couple words on each line. Is there anyway you could fix, perty please?

Omg this is incredible, I'm already hooked! Please keep this going I adore it <3 Perfect way to set up this story, btw... one of the better story starts I've read!