I am sorry, I really do like this and I'm only on the second chapter. But.... Jaime doesnt have schizophrenia. He has multiple personality disorder, Schizophrenia causes hallucinations and paranoia and is generally not diagnosed until the early 20's, while mulitiple personality disorder cause a patient to exhibit well multiple personalities I know you probably didnt mean it as anything disrespectful but yeah it is just something that is very close to my heart and bugs me a bit. I am sorry if this sounds rude, it really wasnt meant to be. I do look forward to the story
Mae and Vic never talk again you know some big fight, Kellin is back in the ansylum/institute and Vic goes in a coma after drinking so much. Kellin gets out and sees vic .. Yeah.....