Hey, Your story is great so far, i love the descriptive way you write and the idea for the story is also great; I love Sherlock too! c: 'It was February, it was cold and I was still moderately angry with Sherlock for dying' this bit made me laugh : p I hope you do update it, even though the last comment was 7 months ago so it doesn't seem all that likely.
I am liking this story. The dialogue is good, and I love your descriptions! It is very mysterious,but itsn't too over the top, which is good! Continue writing this story!! It's great! Maybe have more details about the people themselves, so we can get to know the characters better!
I am liking this story. The dialogue is good, and I love your descriptions! It is very mysterious,but itsn't too over the top, which is good! Continue writing this story!! It's great! Maybe have more details about the people themselves, so we can get to know the characters better!
'It was February, it was cold and I was still moderately angry with Sherlock for dying' this bit made me laugh : p
I hope you do update it, even though the last comment was 7 months ago so it doesn't seem all that likely.