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  • Jayess

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    Dang, this one is plagiarized, too. Another Harlequin ebook.
    July 12th, 2013 at 06:01am
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    I really like your writing style. It's really special and so fun to read. I don't know who Jonathan is but I didn't feel like I needed to to understand the story. Great job!

    I'm posting my comment again since my mibba is being stupid.
    July 11th, 2013 at 08:17am
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    I really like your writing style. It's really special and so fun to read. I don't know who Jonathan is but I didn't feel like I needed to to understand the story. Great job!
    July 11th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • Juno

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    this is just, plain good.
    i mean, i was skeptical at first but you're descriptions were actually pretty well constructed. most people try to over-exaggerate what is going on but you didn't.
    this was great.
    May 29th, 2013 at 09:32pm
  • Jayess

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    Gotta retract my compliment, story's plagiarized. Compliments to the original author, though.
    May 22nd, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • cellardoor0789

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    Amazing! You are an incredible writer! That. Was. Hot.
    May 22nd, 2013 at 05:08pm
  • EmilyQuinn14

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    Another amazing story so far!!! Smile
    May 21st, 2013 at 06:11am
  • cellardoor0789

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    First Crosby and now Toews. Two of my favorite men! The way you write paints a beautiful picture. Can't wait for part 2!
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:41am
  • XJay_Stephensx

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    K. I love you and your stories
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:26am
  • ATL_Beauty_88

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    Again really entertaining hope to read more soon Very Happy
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:21am
  • NatalieW

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    @ Brinnicole
    Haha thanks so much! I've got a lot more where that came from Cool
    May 21st, 2013 at 03:47am
  • Brinnicole

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    The second story of yours I've read today! Love them both and I'm dying to read the end of this one!
    May 21st, 2013 at 03:43am
  • KylieJames

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    Love it!! You have such an amazing writing style!:) Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
    May 21st, 2013 at 03:14am
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