Punishment - Comments

yourmom19091 (100)

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Great one shot! You should write a sequel (;

May 28th, 2013 at 07:27am

juliarox (100)

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amazing

May 28th, 2013 at 03:25am

cellardoor0789 (100)

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Incredible.

May 25th, 2013 at 04:08pm

dreamerforever (100)

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Mmm...loved it!

May 22nd, 2013 at 04:52am

Matt Murray (100)

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Very good story. Great layout. And of course, points for writing about James Neal. I would have liked the pace to be a slower with a bit more detail. Other than that, good luck in the contest!

May 21st, 2013 at 08:58am

Crosby'sBabyGirl (100)

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Whoa, that was great!

May 21st, 2013 at 06:44am

NatalieW (100)

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@ ktan1010

Hahahah is that a "subtle" hint? I'll work on a Kris Letang story ;)

May 21st, 2013 at 06:25am

ktizzle1010 (100)

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Love James Neal but love Kris Letang more.

May 21st, 2013 at 06:24am

heyJAYhey (100)

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love love love :D you should do more one shots!

May 21st, 2013 at 05:43am

KylieJames (100)

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Yay!! A James Neal one! That's was so good! Thanks for posting!

May 21st, 2013 at 05:38am