Sugar - Comments

I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style. I liked that though it was based on the Walking Dead (I'm assuming? I've never watched it) I could still relate to the characters. I found it very commendable your use of the accents in the writing - I know it can be quite difficult to do it without going overboard or losing what you're trying to say. Great job :)

I need an update soon :D I love the story, you really displayed Merle very well. This could be a scene of the show. :D Of course, without the detailed smut ^-^

Gritty, fantastic, and smutty as fuck. Good job! That last line omg >.<

@ GingerCrunch
Thanks for the comment!!
Haha, never mind the smut, it's always nice to hear that someone appreciates your writing style XD And yeah, writing redneck accent dialogue almost killed me. SO. MANY. GRAMMATICAL. ERRORS! Thanks again for offering up your opinion! Glad you liked it!

So. Just a heads up, I don't really know how good this was, smut wise because I don't really have a lot to compare it to. But it was welll written and the paragraphs, thank God, had good spacing. I personally hate writing speech with an accent, if you get what I mean, so I commend you for the effort. Great layout, as well :)

I love you.