just found this and i love it! i when alex said "i know you like potatoes" i started laughing omg. But yay i think alexs character is interesting and i cant wait for more!
This story is fucking awesome. I love the concept, I haven't read anything like it and it's pretty cool how you didn't jump in and introduce Jack right away. I love this story already! I'm stoked for zee next chapt :)
This sounds so interesting! I love the way you portrayed Rian and Alex because you've made them such complex characters, I'm really excited for this and I applaud you originality:)