Shut Your Mouth and Listen Closely Cause the Silence Isn't Easy and I'll Break It Even Harder Than Before - Comments

It was kind of a rocky beginning but you really pulled it together. I'm not much on fan-fiction but you don't even really have to know the band members before reading this story. I definitely like Scar and Matt's little sister. They caught my attention as soon as you started writing in their POV. Keep up the good work and remember to grammar check. And don't be afraid to use details to say something rather than actually saying it.

What the hell did Alex do?!?

I'm glad that Payton and Alex made up. I just hope that Alex doesn't do anything with Scarlett behind Pay's back when they are in Baltimore. And is he really going to not tell Jack that Scarlett is going to be staying with him? That wouldn't be cool.

I love this so much. It's written so well. Please don't ever stop this story!! :)

Alex and Scarlett are SO going to get it on in Baltimore... and quite honestly, I love it! I don't care if that makes me a bitch. I like them together.

I wanna be mad at Payton for being a bitch and running off, but I get it. No girl wants her boyfriend to live with a girl who he's had sex with no matter if other people live there and she likes another dude. Facts are facts and they had sex. I just hope she comes around and understands Alex's pov and not let this affect their relationship.

I wanna be mad at Payton for being a bitch and running off, but I get it. No girl wants her boyfriend to live with a girl who he's had sex with no matter if other people live there and she likes another dude. Facts are facts and they had sex. I just hope she comes around and understands Alex's pov and not let this affect their relationship.

Damnit, Scarlett, stop being a stubborn ass and be with Jack. You obviously still have feelings for him and the guy is head over heels for you so just let yourself be vulnerable for once! Fix them! I don't like sad Jack.

The updates were great as always. And let me just say for three separate writers, you guys blend your writing almost seamlessly! The one critique is there was a lot more errors this chapter than the rest. You may want to go over it a bit.

Hopefully Payton and Alex can figure things out, I love them together even though he can be a total douche at times.

Alex you douche! Why did you have to go and do that? You can't have Scarlett so you make sure that Jack doesn't either? Some friend you are.

Oh my goodness. So much drama. I feel like they never get a break. XD the updates were amazing! :)

Alex is digging himself a huge ass hole. He needs to figure his shit out because he can't have both girls. He has Payton and Scarlett is with Jack so he needs to just leave what happened with him and Scarlett alone and be happy with Payton since that's who he wanted to be with. But from the looks of it that wont happen and he's basically he is digging his own grave. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Poor Scarlett. :/ I hope she really takes Jack up on his offer, even if it is just to save up money to move back to NYC. But I do want to see her and Payton be friends and freak Alex out.

Spent the last two days reading this story and I must say that I am addicted to it! So much drama! Wait until Alex finds out Scarlett and Jack are together, that's going to be fun. Lol and why is he stressing over Payton and Scarlett working together? Is he really going to try and keep hooking up with Scarlett while with Payton? Gosh what a hoe. Haha.

I loved this update, I've been checking constantly to see if it had been

Your character development is going brilliantly well, although some of the sentences in here could have done with a check over.

The last chapter was so cute, I really loved it. Looking forwards to more

I LOVED the updates. I've been checking like everyday to see if this story was updated. I was soooo happy when I logged on today and saw it was.

I definitely love the story and I can see the improvement I just have one thing. I think you guys should maybe get a beta reader or read the story aloud to yourself because some sentences were really awkward and there are quite a few typos.

Other than that the story and character development is absolutely perfect so far. Thanks for being so awesome.

Just to add to my last comment, because for some reason I can't edit, it.

Sorry.

Anyhow, I forgot to say that I really liked your descriptions, they make the characters seem so real that it's almost like you know them personally. And you've somehow made it seem like the reader is in the story themselves.

Got here from comment swap.

I love the banner, your layout matches it perfectly and they look really well together.

This is the first All Time Low fan fiction I've read so I was a little apprehensive at first, but I can honestly say that I really enjoyed it.

I think you've written it very well and the plot is strong, looking forward to more :)

I absolutely love this story! My friends and I saw ATL twice because we liked them so much the first time! A beautiful banner by the way I wish I had the patience to actually sit down and learn how to make one. The one I did looked like complete crap.

Anywho, the only thing that really stuck out to me, was trying to find out which girl was which. I was getting so confused, but then a key word would pop out an I'd finally catch on.

Also someone pointed it out to me that I had minor mistakes. I really didn't believe them because I would sit and proofread my chapters over and over again. Read something that you posted along time ago, you'll find a lot more grammatical errors over something that you have just written. I went back and read the first chapter of my story and I was cringing at the end needless to say.

But keep up the good work! Deff. giving a Rec for this!